ok luvtick i have finally worked it outluvtick wrote:Part 8:
Three more days in Amsterdam. Three more days with Bong…
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We all get ready to begin the day.
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Our long day is coming to a close as many of the other ones have, at Basjoe. After a smoke, or two, or three, or… The cold? Not so much… But I know it will soon be warm. Indeed.
you have indeed finished the story and here is the thing i missed ...
on the day when part 8 begins, you have three more days, and on the first of those three days you do the trip to zandvoort and the sea, and end up in the last paragraph in basjoe
that means there are two more days to be reported upon ...
... but wait ... we have been given the biggest hint of all about those two days in the sentence 'But I know it will soon be warm', and now we can be in doubt about the next two days as they will take care of themselves and really we don't need to know the details anyway, that's the beauty of the ending
the hint is a better ending than anything you could possibly have said
....sterling airlines sealed our fates....she smells nice too
